Oooh, I really like it! And Decent!Sirius... yes, lovely, although nice and snarky SS/SB interaction at the beginning too. And the Lee Jordan bit? Priceless. The McG/Snape interaction is good too, as usual, although a bit limited of course by McG's unconscious state.
One thing, that would be taking Moody's name in *vain* not vane (nasty spellcheck).
As for title, how about say, "The Best of Hands"? Or - wait - maybe that's stupid, but hey, it's an idea, at least.
But yes, yum. I'm currently trying to overhaul some of my ideas to fit post-OotP canon, but I can't think of a plot. Sigh. I really want to get them on a Muggle Airline, and yes, for some reason I want McGonagall to illegally transfigure them some passports.
And I soooo gave McGonagall a tartan carpetbag in one of my (unpublished) fics before OotP. *g*
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One thing, that would be taking Moody's name in *vain* not vane (nasty spellcheck).
As for title, how about say, "The Best of Hands"? Or - wait - maybe that's stupid, but hey, it's an idea, at least.
But yes, yum. I'm currently trying to overhaul some of my ideas to fit post-OotP canon, but I can't think of a plot. Sigh. I really want to get them on a Muggle Airline, and yes, for some reason I want McGonagall to illegally transfigure them some passports.
And I soooo gave McGonagall a tartan carpetbag in one of my (unpublished) fics before OotP. *g*